Tuesday, May 12, 2009

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if only i was that angel,
who could touch your soul,
understand your pains and sorrow
and stay with you until tomorrow...

...can you feel my love?

8 comments:

  1. let not it be was, but is. =)

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  2. so, there should be no 'if'?
    contemplations...

    i wish i am the angel,
    if i was the angel.

    i picked the later over the first, it rimes with the corresponding line ;p

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  3. I wish that I am the angel
    who touches your soul,
    know your aching sorrow,
    yet still stay until tomorrow.

    ...Let me feel your love.

    how about this? how do you interpret? =)

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  4. it seems to me that 'you' have someone by his side already. and the angel knows your pain and sorrow. like the person 'you' have sounds great.
    but 'i' am aching for your love.

    that's how i see it. how do u see mine?

    they are different.

    yours is a good one too :)

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  5. Two ways.
    One is the persona is his woman but not a good one. So, she wishes that she could be the kind of angel who can understand him, can touch his heart and also stand by him during harsh times. The last line is a question, how can her guy understand her passions towards him because she can only express it subtly.

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  6. The second. I think this is how you interpret it.

    She(Angel to be) asks the guy that can he feels her love for him if she can touch his heart, understand his sorrows and be with him always.

    *Thanks. Yours are exquisite too. -)

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  7. The second. I think this is how you interpret it.

    She(The angel to be) asks the guy, can he feels her love for him if she could touch his heart, nderstand his sorrows and stay with him always.

    *Thanks. Yours are exquisite too.

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  8. well, the way i interpret it really is

    there's this guy that she likes. but the guy has someone. she doesn't know that someone.

    all she knows is if she was that someone, she would do blah blah blah.

    bcos she's in her position now, she cannot do those.

    so, wishing those, she hopes he could feel her; the feelings she has for him.

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